Dreaming in the Mirror

I dream of you

Do you dream of me?

Am I alone in these dreams

of you lost in a world of love

without me beside you?

Holding my breath

I see your smile

with watery eyes

Through the mirror I can hear

 a weary voice calling me to you

so loud the sound reverberates

 throughout my glass soul

bouncing back and forth

I trace your face with

a shaky finger

why can't I touch you?

why can't I hear you?

 only echos in

the banks of chaos

inside my soul

why can't I feel your touch 

in my withered soul?

 I cant touch you

only surreal, vivid dreams of you

from behind the cold shattered mirror

lives my flaming eternal love

I dream only to be with you

to feed my hungry soul within

the loves mirror

I long to  

be freeded from this agony

behind the miror

I shall reside

 to be with you in

the mirror of our soul

long last and past it resides

within the very depth

of the glass that is

my inner heart's shell

 This mirror is my

 inner soul and

you live within it

now and forever

 to be lovers in a

mirror world

lost in love

forevermore

  

Lasla Moore

 

Author's Note

All reviews are welcomed!

Reviews

[BABSIE BEE]

So very passionate and imaginative. Thank you Lasla.
BBXX

[Dani California]

"only echos in
the banks of chaos
inside my soul"

I loved those lines. This is a great piece!
I could feel the yearning in this, and I agree
with Apollonia, your font and word structure
captured the surreal feeling quite well!

Nice work!!

[TamiViolet]

Absolutely brilliant. Large font really captures that surreal feeling along with exquisite word choice. This is my favorite of yours thus far Lasla!

to be lovers in a
mirror world
lost in love
forevermore

The tone / mood of the piece is perfect. Beautiful work!!!!

[Lyrical Love]

Great bones, filled with passion...