What I like about this poem is the maturity of the feelijngs behind the words; ironic, as if a heart was waiting to be known, already discovered, behind a mask; so then, it seems that as you were writing this, recapturing the love that was always there and never went away and only grew stronger with each passing day, you bonded with your own emotions, welcoming them all, no matter the joys or pains of them, so then, as your emotions grew, as the love grew, as your words on this page grew,
so did you.
nicely done, Lasla. to be able to follow your heart and your feelings are very prominent in this write. it is true that no matter the past pains and disillusionment, there is always something better out there to alleviate that pain as long as you let it happen....not worrying what the future holds, to live in the now and be thankful for the love that you have found is what it is all about.
What I like about this poem is the maturity of the feelijngs behind the words; ironic, as if a heart was waiting to be known, already discovered, behind a mask; so then, it seems that as you were writing this, recapturing the love that was always there and never went away and only grew stronger with each passing day, you bonded with your own emotions, welcoming them all, no matter the joys or pains of them, so then, as your emotions grew, as the love grew, as your words on this page grew,
so did you.
Greeting Friends,
Thank you for coming by my profile! I have been writing short stories, fiction, sci-fi stories and poems since childhood. As I grew, I became interested in other forms of artisti.. more..