Beacon of Hope

Her tears made her eyes so bright like a beacon of hope,

This hope came from the clouds in the sky, it helped her cope,

She'd wipe them away to convey a happy look,

It worked so well on everyone it was all it took.


Nothing could take away the pain she hid,

It would only disappear by the things he did,

This boy had a way of swaying her thoughts in a positive direction,

His words she had in her mind like a precious jewelry collection.


His smile made the clouds seem to scurry,

It made the happiness seem less blurry,

This boy came and entered her life,

It cut away the depression like a long, sharp knife.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem.
"This boy came and entered her life,
It cut away the depression like a long, sharp knife."
I liked the way you led to the above positive ending. Good to release pain and gain hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Peter Mogba]

hope is a beautiful thing to feel an it came at the right time. nice one dear

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful little poem. :) Rudi
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[Matching Socks]

Wonderful to see hope shining through a difficult time.
Lovely poem.

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[Justin]

that was really great, it was sad but it tells what a person is going through :) great job