Jet Black

You don't tell me anything,


It's like you stopped caring,


The more the days would go by,


The more you never said hi.

What's wrong? What did I do?,


I honestly wish I knew,


I see you living your life without me,


It's almost like you'd rather me flee.

I want to hear your voice,


It seems this separation was only your choice,


I hope you're not ignoring my pain,


As if from this hurt there was something to gain.

You've banished me from your kingdom,


This eye deceiving thing as left me with symptoms,


All I want is your presence back,


But instead you've pushed me in a corner of jet black.

Author's Note

I would love some feedback!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and good words. The pain of love can break us down.
"All I want is your presence back,
But instead you've pushed me in a corner of jet black."
The above lines honest and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

Love the lay out of words!
Keep it up!

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[Dee]

This is a beautiful poem, it is raw, yet elegant!

[Lauren]

The last two lines!! I love them. They make a powerful poem even more powerful. I hope everything works out for you!

[J Johnson III]

I like it. Something a lot of people can relate to.