Just a Short Poem..

This is just a short poem 

just a little muse

I hope you love this poem

I hope you are all amused

This is just a little poem

not to make you alarmed 

this poem is at least 25 lines long

lets see whats in my pockets

just to take up space

I wish that I could see the expression on your face

I'm emptying my pockets

and I will tell you

what is in my pockets 

and something on my shoe

I have some old bubblegum

And a chewed up crayon

I have a naked barbie and her plastic hand

I'm taking out some hostess

(I've lost THOSE for a year)

I find some army figures

all bunched up with my glue

I take out a box of legos

(how'd they get in there?)

that's what is in my pockets

this is the end of my short muse

I hope you are acquainted

I hope you are amused  

And next time that I list things 

I will show them all to you

this is just a short little poem

and if you haters just don't like it

I'll just say f**k you!

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Not sure what to say about this. Definitely packed with playfulness & imagination. Not accustomed to the use of the word "muse" like this, but I looked it up & this is definitely a musing of yours. I guess I just don't get the ending, becuz the rest of the piece is so welcoming & childlike & gentle. Frankly, I don't think the haters are worth spending a single line of your writing on. What you give attention to, grows. But it's an interesting & original write, so you deserve kudos for sure!