Natural Selection

Natural Selection

A Poem by larry
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this is a comedic poem. made for entertainment (well duh)

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Natural selection
I'm the best
Natural selection
I passed the genepool tests
Natural selection
Darn my height
Natural selection
I can't fight
Natural selection
I'm allergic to air
Natural selection
life ain't fair
Natural selection
I'm starving
Natural selection
wait- how did I survive to adulthood?

© 2016 larry


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Good use of repetition.
genes are not picked, but received.
It is natural to question the why of it.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice entertaining little ditty. The points you bring up are quite unusual & unexpected, requiring the reader to think a bit to relate it to the title & repeated refrain. I'm not sure what "allergic to air" means. I like your playful sense of inhibition. Well, now that I've read all your stuff posted here, looking forward to seeing what's next!?!??!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Funny and witty. Bravo...............................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Don't worry , there are still more demons yet to come. Such is the process of natural selection.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2016
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