I'll Be

If I should leave this world below

And I'm no longer by your side

Here's some things you need to know

To remember, though I've died

I am with you during the day

In the sun that warms your face

I'll be the wind that blows your way

And causes your heart to race

I'll be the smile as you walk by

That stranger on the street

I'll be the sparkle in the eye

Of everyone you meet

I'll be the rain when times are bad

And the sleeves that wipe your tears

I'll be the prayer when you are sad

That drives away your fears

I'll be the whisper upon your skin

That causes you to blush

I'll be the courage you carry within

That gives your heart that rush

I'll be the kiss when you're asleep

That warms your silent dreams

I'll be the promise I swore to keep

No matter how hard it seems

I'll be the picture, your mind will hold

When your memory starts to fade

I'll be your blanket in the harshest cold

The warmth your love has made

I'll be the quiet that forms the sound

Whenever you think of me

Whatever you've lost, I'll be your found

That's what I will be

Reviews

[White Ink]

oh wow! that was so lovely sweet and touching! it flows smoothly and gently.. love it!

[David O Whalen (O Haol..]

Your usual excellence!

[Theresa]

This is beautiful. Such comforting words that many people who have lost a loved one can relate to. Thank you for sharing your talent.

[Annabelle Lee]

Whisk, you never fail to make me smile. Your words to you seem to be like spells to the magician. This poem was perfect. I read this and hope that someday I'll be able to understand what it's like to feel this way. When I read it's almost as if I AM experiencing it. But as usual, your work has left me breathless. Bravo

A.L.

[judith106]

I'm in tears at the moment. I lost my younger Brother 5 years ago and feel I will never get past it. I seem to always search for a sign of his presence and your words really hit home..Thanks for this one

[Ceri]

I love your attention to detail, to the little things in life that ultimately, are what life is all about. If you ever were to pass away, I'm sure this poem would be a great comfort to your loved ones, and while (thankfully) you have not, this poem also speaks as a beautiful tribute to your love. Nicely written and observed.

[Emerald Seas]

Great poem, Whisk! I read this a couple of ways. First, from a partner that has passed on, giving words of encouragement to the one left here to carry on without him/her. Second, I read this as a comforting message from a parent to their child. I thought of my mother as I read through this piece - 30 years gone now so the comfort expressed in you poem, feeling her presence around me is what came to mind as I continued to read. Well done!

[Lily Mae]

This really grabs my heart.. especially today.. xo