Twilight(Haiku)

whispers of daylight

still holding onto the skies

'til stars break her grip

Reviews

[Ariel Olivia]

Beautiful.

[kublakhan27]

Good haiku are hard to write, and this is a good one :)

[Renée]

Nice work Whisk !

[Dean Kuch®]

Beautiful Haiku. You paint a vivid picture with so few words, just as such a poem is designed to do...65

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Fantastic. I wish my haiku's were as good as yours!

[Rhea752]

lovely. beautiful.vivid. i would keep going but that would take all night!! :)

[Michael G.]

A well written thought.

[sienikeha]

sweet : )