All The King's Horses

All The King's Horses

A Poem by Whiskurz

All the king's horses and all the king's men
Couldn't put our love back together again
You've broken the trust that acts as the glue
There's nothing to fix between me and you
The words that we used are now said in vain
The memories we grew are reminders of pain
The smiles that we shared are lost to the past
The promises we made, destined not to last
Our love has been banished because of your lies
Your repeated transgressions have broken all ties
"I'm sorry" to me is but a very old song
That tells of the things that always went wrong
A knight I was not, I made no such claim
I promised no fortune, I promised no fame
I promised no castle that stood on a hill
But yet you promised your love to me still
'Twas a dragon called lust that tore us apart
His flame of desire has captured your heart
And all the king's horses and all the king's men
Couldn't put our love back together again

© 2012 Whiskurz


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Loved it....very good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Delightful write. the rhyme works wonderfully, the content full of emotions that are clearly defined. Excellent way to incorporate the nursery rhyme in the first and last stanza. loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it. Thats all I can reakky say the play with words nd the rhyme gave the poem a greater meaning. It flowed smoothly and with purpose. Beautifully written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

chills on my arms and running down my legs......this is fantastic.....I am all over sharing this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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