Granny's Art

Granny's Art

A Poem by Whiskurz

My granny was only twelve years old
When she got her first tattoo
She was kind of a rebellious child
Back in nineteen twenty-two

She hid that thing for a little while
'Til her daddy finally got wise
He took that girl to the woodshed
With murder in both of his eyes

He asked that girl, "What did you do,
Don't you know that's gotta be a sin?"
"Now look what you've done to your body,
Has your mama seen your skin?"

Now my granny was a stubborn child
She didn't listen to a word he said
She didn't hide the one she already had
But she got three more instead

Now as my granny got older, so did her skin
And her ink was droopy and sad
You'd think that woman would feel remorse
But I think she was almost glad

Now the art sunk down to her elbows
As it wobbled to and fro
The butterfly tats would take to flight
Everywhere Granny would go

Now another tat was a bloodshot eye
But now it was always winking
On the other arm was a battleship
But of course that thing was sinking

Well that's the story of my granny's art
She lived to be a hundred and two
The day she died it said "Rest in peace"
Not the gravestone, her last tattoo

© 2012 Whiskurz


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As always your pieces either make me smile or cry. And this one most definitely made me smile. Any piece that can bring emotion to the reader is a great writer in my opinion. ^_~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem! Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's awesome and unfortunately, true for many lol loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


THIS WAS A FUN READ .. WISH I COULD HAVE KNOWN HER .. LOL

JASMINE ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOL :) Your Granny seems like a real hip lady! This was a really good storytelling poem. I do love those the most! There are some really wonderful lines in there. I enjoyed, thanks for the smile!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is great! The stanzas describing what the tattoos look like in her old age are my favorites. The flying butterflies, the winking eye, the sinking ship--brilliant.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahaha!!! I really enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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