Out of Reach

Out of Reach

A Poem by Whiskurz

My breath somehow forsakes me
It will not whisper your name
My heart says I'm unworthy
It cannot ignite this flame
My soul cries out for recoginition
But my lips won't let me smile
Tempted by your heavenly beauty
But captive to denial
My dreams filled with your vision
I dare not close my eyes
Everytime you pass me by
Another piece of me dies
I am but a simple man
And you, a goddess of desire
A treasure meant to intice my soul
One I shall not aquire
How much longer must I suffer
How long will my soul beseech
Alas, I turn and walk away
For you're simply out of reach

© 2012 Whiskurz


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Each stanza, every single stanza is my favorite here.
Superb poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely. Written so well and I love the rhyme scheme

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh my gosh, well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is written from the heart of longing .. Unrequited Love .. the most painful kind ..

Tear-full .. i can relate .. Jasmine

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful. I'm sure every one of us has felt the agony of one-sided love. Very-well written, congrats.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lack of confidence shos in this poem. Perhaps she only seems out of reach.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

199 Views
6 Reviews
Added on May 3, 2012
Last Updated on May 3, 2012