Today I Saw A Diamond Cry

Today I saw a diamond cry

For your beauty stole its shine

The flowers all began to sigh

For you make them all benign

The stars no longer reflect the moon

For you have become their light

Even the sun is not immune

For he chases away the night

Your shadow makes the sun rejoice

He follows where ever you go

His love for you has bound his voice

Or he would have told you so

Even the breeze whispers your name

Just to touch your hair

Your shadow tries to share your fame

She follows you everywhere

Today I saw a diamond cry

For your beauty stole its shine

Not a day goes by that I don't ask why

The Good Lord made you mine

Reviews

[OctoberDawn]

This is absolutely AMAZING! That is truly all that I can say, I'm speechless right now

[Morrigan Nicole]

Makes me jelous that you have such amazing talent like this. Envious.

[Kaya]

This is so cute!!! I really like it :D

This is so adorable! I really enjoyed reading this... It took me too another world while reading and it made me smile.. Keep up the good writing! :)

[hoonsha]

The title originally caught my eye as a recent submission to a contest. Then because of your style I quickly realized I'd just reviewed and read a handful of your works.

It's a very soft poem, with a loving caress. The middle three verses have such atmosphere. The ending is strong and the rest of the poem suits its purpose.

You thrive in this form. I would like to see you branch out just out of curiosity. If you decide to, do let me know.

[Destinyxi]

Aw this is really sweet haha. The title caught my attention because I wrote a poem about diamonds and tears :)