Strangers

Strangers

A Poem by Whiskurz

Two strangers meet and fall in love
The way it's meant to be
Their love is pure and meant to last
As anyone can see
They start a family like lovers do
Two kids and brand new house
They fight the world to make it better
This husband and his spouse
They both attend the PTA
Their football games and such
They always do the best they can
But soon it becomes too much
The world keeps getting heavier
And they start to grow apart
Then distance sets up residence
Inside the lover's hearts
Then inside an empty courtroom
Custody becomes complete
Now on every other weekend
Is where two strangers meet

© 2012 Whiskurz


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This is structured well, the last stanza is really powerful.. as it is a great contradiction to what the couple used to be. Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Divorce is a horrible thing to go through. Had to deal with it once,
wasn't to pretty. Well expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Divorce. Such a horrible thing. Especially if kids are involved. This was very enjoyable. Nice write. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2012
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