The Perfect Love Poem

If I could write like William Shakespeare

You would be my Juliet

I would write the perfect love poem

The world could not forget

If I could paint da Vinci's masterpiece

The world would know your name

Your smile would steal the hearts of men

Your beauty would bring you fame

If I could play the perfect love song

Mozart himself, would blush

Your song would be on everyone's lips

And cause their hearts to rush

If I could tell the perfect love story

Twain's pen would be retired

You would be the world's best seller

And by everyone, desired

If I could choose the perfect flower

You would be my rose

The flower of love would be your name

My heart is where it grows

If I could write the perfect love poem

There would be nothing I'd have to do

For this poem's already been written

This poem of love is you

Reviews

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

So beautiful. You are an amazing poet. All of your poems are so well written and have wonderful flow.

[Autumn]

If someone had wrote that poem to me, I'd fall in love straight away! The last verse is the one I prefer, although the whole poem is so well written and not too cheesy, just the perfect amount of love.

[Emerald Seas]

Oh... nice writing, Whisk! This lady has captured your heart and you write of her with such skill and style. It is a very lovely "love" poem, indeed.

[Worms]

brilliantly done
nice use of allusion
it is always the most beautiful thing in the world
and it always shall be