Broken Things

Broken Things

A Poem by Whiskurz

I found a land with broken things
Scattered upon the ground
A place that only heartache brings
That's where my heart was found

I found a pile of broken trust
And promises everywhere
A wedding ring that's starting to rust
Too broken and bent to wear

I found a pile of broken dreams
Dreams that didn't come true
I climbed a hill of broken smiles
Smiles I gave to you

I found our future in tiny pieces
Beside a lake of tears
I tried to hold some long lost hope
But it crumbles and disappears

I even found our second chances
But the hurt just weighed too much
I found, "I'm sorry" a million times
But it was way too painful to the touch

I found a land with broken things
Scattered upon the ground
A place that only heartache brings
That's where my heart was found

© 2013 Whiskurz


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This is heartbreaking. I can relate to this. :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend.....Whisk
A broken heart is often so very difficult to heal that it seems as it shall never be in a place to know healing with love again!
Sad, but expressed with beautiful emotion!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww... melancholy described beautifully.. i loved it!
A new poem added to my faves.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words my friend.....Whisk
Even though this is heavy hearted your style makes it easier to consume..
great one Whisk !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend.....Whisk
Renée

11 Years Ago

My pleasure !

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Added on January 26, 2013
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