The Things That We Forget
A Poem by
Whiskurz
The longer we live, the harder it is To remember our fading past Our memories somehow slip away Destined never to last Have you ever wondered what happens To the things that we forget? They're handed down in the stories we tell To people we've never met As time goes on they start to grow Each time that they are told Sometimes our memories are written down In a book that might be sold While others may turn to legend Growing bigger every day Some are told a thousand times Each time a different way Our memories start to fade with time But they're not finished yet People will know the life we've lived In the things that we forget
© 2012 Whiskurz
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When I read you I'm always blown away by the powerful messages you deliver but with such grace and ease.. Wonderful penning..xo
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Lily Mae.......Whisk
People will know the life we've lived
In the things that we forget
Never there was a time that I've read anything for you and I wasn't amazed, I enjoyed this one very much, perfect rhyming, excellent choice of theme, I read it aloud , that much I've enjoyed :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
People will know the life we've lived
In the things that we forget
Never there was a time that I've read anything for you and I wasn't amazed, I enjoyed this one very much, perfect rhyming, excellent choice of theme, I read it aloud , that much I've enjoyed :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend.....Whisk
How very true, my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
How very true, my friend.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Michael.....Whisk
Very true, and beautiful poem!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very true, and beautiful poem!
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend.....Whisk
The things that we forget - how profound. I find every day something else I've forgotten. This definitely strikes a chord within me...
Great write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The things that we forget - how profound. I find every day something else I've forgotten. This definitely strikes a chord within me...
Great write.
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend.....Whisk
The last two stanza's are the ones that pulled the whole piece together for me. The fourth one mentioning how people tell stories and could exaggerate them or add different things to them, at least that's my interpretation. The last stanza gives me a somewhat..."mixed" feeling, I guess you could say. The most prominent thing I got from it was that maybe people see how you really live by/from you forgetting things, maybe bad things or experiences, or maybe something else. Good write. Made me think.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The last two stanza's are the ones that pulled the whole piece together for me. The fourth one mentioning how people tell stories and could exaggerate them or add different things to them, at least that's my interpretation. The last stanza gives me a somewhat..."mixed" feeling, I guess you could say. The most prominent thing I got from it was that maybe people see how you really live by/from you forgetting things, maybe bad things or experiences, or maybe something else. Good write. Made me think.
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend.....Whisk
true dat
Posted 11 Years Ago
true dat
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend.....Whisk
I love this poem its beautiful. People may pass on but they will never be forgotten.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I love this poem its beautiful. People may pass on but they will never be forgotten.
11 Years Ago
Thanks again my friend.....Whisk
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Added on December 10, 2012
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