November's Butterfly

Sometimes in November

When the sun is sitting high

A warm Fall breeze will steal the leaves

And cause the trees to cry

Sometimes in November

A butterfly will appear

A cherished thought, a battle fought

For one you loved so dear

Sometimes in November

A daughter will pass away

You wallow in grief, seek relief

And then you learn to pray

Sometimes in November

An angel gets its wings

It's good and bad but always sad

Both joy and pain this brings

Sometimes in November

A family must say goodbye

As Heaven awaits to open its gates

To November's butterfly

Reviews

[Frieda P]

OMG, you've made me cry...I can't say anything more, except I'm sorry you know this pain.

[Elvis Gilley]

This really hit home for me. I appreciate the experience that you have shared. Great job and I will be reading more.

[Georgia Gypsy]

This really touched me, thank you for sharing. :)
GG

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Michael G.]

You have your heart deep in this one my friend.
It brought to mind "Sometimes in Winter," by Blood, Sweat, and Tears.
Well done.

[Whiskurz]

Thanks again Michael.....Whisk

[Olivia Marie]

This is more then beautiful. Perfectly written. Amazing

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[LA Lorena]

This is very beautiful Whisk, a very sad write. You put so much feeling into this, and it shows

Lovely sentiments expressed, so much so that while I could offer some words to polish it up just slightly, to do so almost seems insensitive and intrusive.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Patricia B. Hepler]

If you've experienced such a loss, my heart goes out to you..
This is an incredibly poignant poem, written very well.
*pat

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Corset]

Sometimes you break out some really incredibly beautiful poetry, this is one of those times, I absolutely love this write.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[devon]

This was beautiful, and I feel like I've taken on a journey while reading this poem. Gorgeous write!

[Whiskurz]

Thank you Devon.....Whisk

[devon]

You're welcome :)

[Serena]

Awesome poem. The words are really sweet, and the rhyming was beautiful :)
^-^

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend.....Whisk