Love's Graveyard

I wonder if there's a graveyard

For the love that didn't last

A place to bury our hopes and dreams

A tomb of forgotten past

A place where broken promises lay

After they become a lie

A place to bury relationships

After they give up and die

A place we can bury tomorrows

To put the future in its grave

A place to bury our wasted kisses

And all the trust we gave

A place to bury our commitment

That we gave away in vain

A place to bury our heartaches

That caused us so much pain

A place we can bury betrayal

That we too often denied

A place to bury the broken smiles

And the river of tears we've cried

A place to bury all these things

That I've been speaking of

A place to bury our dead desires

A graveyard of broken love

Reviews

[koty bell]

great write very expressive and lots of imagery here as well

[pumpkin head]

Sad write, so well expressed. Very poetic as well

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'I wonder if there's a graveyard
For the love that didn't last
A place to bury our hopes and dreams
A tomb of forgotten past..'

Very much enjoyed this poem. I could've used this many years ago, back in my day.. ;)
Loved the topic; enjoyed the rhythm. Thank you for sharing your work~ pat

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

You are a master. This means so much to me, right now. Not a memorable review, but a heartfelt one.

[Whiskurz]

Thanks again my friend......Whisk

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This was such a welcome read. A favorite.