Missing Pieces

Love is just a puzzle

Though you must admit

It makes a beautiful picture 

When all the pieces fit

If the commitment piece is missing

And it's hard to find devotion

We try to find the promise piece

While looking for emotion

Respect and trust are smaller pieces

But they make the puzzle whole

And where did I put that honesty

Does anybody know?

I've finally found affection

I think it goes right here

Patience is a bigger piece

But it seems to disappear

To make this puzzle whole

Is a work that never ceases

Love becomes the picture

When we find the missing pieces

Reviews

[Hidden]

I love your writing style. Its beautiful and imaginative. You paint an amazing picture.

[Baby Ricochet]

Love it!

[Pax]

Missing Pieces i think everyone experience that..beautiful words. great job.

[pumpkin head]

Respect and trust are smaller pieces
But they make the puzzle whole
And where did I put that honesty
Does anybody know?

you hit the nail on the head here with this one,
awesome writing style that you have.
so poetic

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This made me smile. Clever and insightful.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A poem with a message .. good one !

Jasmine :)

[Michael G.]

You might get me to like puzzles! Once started... hard to stop.
Well done, Whisk.

(1st line... "a" ?)

[Whiskurz]

Thank you Michael.....and for the typo.......Whisk

[....]

WOW you're first three stanza's are so true, so VERY true.
The last stanza is amazing, everything all works out in the end.
Sometimes it doesn't though. I do like this. Amazing write.

[Whiskurz]

Thanks PL......Whisk

[Michael G.]

You're welcome. And thanks for another great poem!

Like Gallagher, the comedian says...
"You've got S-T-Y-L-E!!!"

[Renée]

Oh I am loving this one !

[Whiskurz]

Thanks again my friend.....Whisk

[Renée]

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