A Place Called Love

A Place Called Love

A Poem by Whiskurz

Love is not a thing we feel
It's a place where hearts can grow
An unseen land where dreams are born
And travel to and fro

A place where heartbeats beat the same
Where memories can be made
A place to dance beneath the stars
With no music being played

Where hugs and kisses stand in line
And taught to wait their turn
A place where tears are cast aside
And hearts are taught to yearn

Where honesty lives and learns to thrive
A place we practice trust
Where battles are fought and won each day
Against that thing called lust

Love is a place where lovers go
A land where commitment is free
A special place where hearts can grow
A place for you and me

© 2012 Whiskurz


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So lovely! I loved every stanza... Therefore, I cannot choose the one that stands out, because it delivers such a Poignant message of honesty and true love as a whole. Very Romantic and sweet...well penned!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whiskurz

12 Years Ago

Thank you my friend.....Whisk
Robbie~xoxo~

12 Years Ago

It was refreshing to read...Thank you for writing it! :)
Where honesty lives and learns to thrive
A place we practice trust
Where battles are fought and won each day
Against that thing called lust

I listed my favorite verse here. This is the best description I have read of love other than the bible.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whiskurz

12 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend......Whisk
I like the flow of kind and gentle desires in the poem. I agree with your words. Love should be magical and beautiful. A place to rest and know peace. No weakness in this amazing poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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