Lost in echoes cave

In Echoes cave peoples voices wander

The souls of the damned breath the dust

In the cave there screams walk o'er

There voices fade into the rust

In echoes cave my soul sings on

Waiting for long lost paradise

And even though my heart does not fawn

It waits for long gone vice

My soul sings a song of dread

Even though already gone

It does not understand death

It still breaths it’s last breath

Gone forever in echoes cave

Ready to be bold and be brave

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[IndigoChild]

i tried to rhyme tell me what you think