A thousand things I should of said before I ran away

A thousand things I should of said before I ran away

A Poem by IndigoChild

I watch as you walk a thousand miles away from me
Your eyes to the ground
I've hurt you and i know it
My heart is cold
I was selfish to keep you close
And there are a thousand things i should of said
Before i turned around and ran away
I should of told you
How much i cared 
I should of told you that i loved you
I should of told you that i am nothing with out you
I should of let you go
I should of told you how alive i was when you were close
I should of told you the truth
I should of made you understand
That even though im cruel
Im cruel because of you
But i ran away
I ran to die
I ran to break
It was a chance i had to take 
to get you back again
I love you, moon 
and that's some thing a thousand apologies will never change

© 2013 IndigoChild


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Aloud - this one is felt, and moving. Good tone and intent.

Just on paper, this one is flawed badly by appearances and wrong words ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a good start it felt a bit indecisive, the last two lines kind of confused me though. Other than that looks good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 12, 2013
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 IndigoChild
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