Insanity loves me

Insanity loves me

A Poem by IndigoChild
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what happens when you fall in love with a result of your insanity? it gets complicated and hurts.

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The lights are flashing
knives scrape bone
arms wrap around me
why dont you just leave me alone
do you love me?
are you insanity?
oh don't tell me
just please love me
Voices screaming
little girls laugh
soft loving whispers
feather by my ears
are you insanity?
do you love me?
Is it safe to love you too?
are you real to me?
can you love insanity?
when it is your real reality?
Just hold me
just touch me
just love me insanity
im to far gone to care
if you are really there
just wrap your arms around me
and love me insanity

© 2013 IndigoChild


Author's Note

 IndigoChild
again the grammar is bad but when its what someone lives every day it should not matter

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The grammar is fine IF it's what you are satisfied with using. Titles such as Sane or Insane are hard to define and harder still to portray. Perhaps you would have gotten your points across to me more if you hadn't necessarily used "insanity" quite as much and just let the disjointedness of the actions speak for themselves...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The grammar is fine IF it's what you are satisfied with using. Titles such as Sane or Insane are hard to define and harder still to portray. Perhaps you would have gotten your points across to me more if you hadn't necessarily used "insanity" quite as much and just let the disjointedness of the actions speak for themselves...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an awesome poem it deffinatly paints a good picture of insanity. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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