Sleeping

Your eyes flutter
face gentle embracing moonlight
i hear you breathing
and know
that i am forever a part of this world
and your life
sleep baby girl
sleep for me

Author's Note

short and not very good i need practice

Reviews

[AWickedMoon]

I think the second line needs some rewording possible. "that gentle face, embrassing the moonlight"? or A face so gentle, encased in moonlight"?
Just some suggestion tho! Looks like it can be an awesome poem! :D