My Dark, Evil Mind

This is a quick sonnet I made to express how my mind can sort of be it's own person sometimes. It is to give personality to my anxious and sad side.

My mind, as black as the night,

Corrupts the unsuspecting visitor.

It is a nasty thing, quick to jump at any slight

Opposition. I do not like my mind, it's insecure

Nature, it's endless storm of self-hatred.

It rips at my very flesh every day.

Thankfully there is a cure to this constant dread.

Not the pills, not the house in which I stay,

And not the mandatory support. It is the minds

Of others that give me guidance through my hell.

Not many understand it, but it is the binds

Formed with my friends that release me from my shell.

And to that, I say thank you.

For helping me change my point of view.

Author's Note

This is my first sonnet not written for school, and it's really just a way to get my feelings out. Feel free to leave suggestions for future sonnets and writings!

Reviews

[Kay]

That was deep man, but I love it
This was an awesome way to show your emotion and talent