“Good bye”

Ever since I saw you,

I knew that I Loved You.

Even before I got to know you.

I knew, that you were the one for me.

 

I never thought,

That this would happen to us.

Slowly but surely,

We were drifting away.

 

Now that my eyes hurt from crying,

My body feels weak from trying.

I really loved you,

Till the day you said… Goodbye.

 

All of the kisses,

All of the hugs…

Now sleep with the fishes

And decay with the bugs.

 

You were the reason for my smile,

You were the reason for my happiness…

Who ever thought you’d tell me to run the mile

And suck up my sadness…

 

I’m sorry I couldn’t keep my promises.

I’m sorry that I lied…

A part of me just died,

No more happiness…

 

Goodbye to everything,

Goodbye to the life we used to live.

If it means anything,

You were the greatest thing to ever happen to me.

 

Author's Note

I just want to get a few pointers on how I can improve my poetry writing skills. Thank you. :)

Reviews

[The Realist]

life goes on. great work Larayasha DiAlma! keep up the good work :)
yours truly The Realist