Recipe for Life

 My body is like a machine,

Which needs lot's of oil;

The more I take care of it,

The longer i'll be on this soil.

 

If I do lots of exercise,

And eat the right foods;

Not only could I live longer,

But i'll be in the right moods.

 

The soul and the mind

come into this too;

Like, if I treat people right,

And have lots to do.

 

To live long and happy,

Is a dream that I plan;

So i'll keep to these princibles;

For as long as I can.

Reviews

[Distantview123]

A good attitude to have. Of course, none of us know how long we have on this planet, but a healthy lifestyle will certainly tilt things in our favour.

[ShooBLeeDoo]

Thank you so much I like your stuff too (:

[Annie S]

Lovely title and your rhyming pattern. All people should have this recipe in their life which will then be a batter place to live in and life
Good Job! :)

[ShooBLeeDoo]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Annie S]

you're welcome