Sensed Unseen

Sensed Unseen

Flutters of skin-skimming caresses,

Tiny, breathy kisses

Lightly, softly

Ghosting hairs on the romanced arm of fortuned opportunity.

But sense can never see

Such phantomed exhalations of invisibility.

Lanny

Reviews

[pam love]

been there , done that , I LIKE IT.

[Lanny]

Pam,

Thanks for your reflective comment, and all the best,

Lanny

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I, too, got a shiver from this one...reminds me of a favorite film of mine called "the uninvited" from 1944...great ghost story...no blood, no gore, just the rising hairs and the chills...
j.

[Lanny]

I truly appreciate the specific feedback and your kindness, so happy you enjoyed it.

All the best,

Lanny

[Chris Shaw]

How lovely. Your words sent a shiver down my spine. A delightful one I might add. Very nicely done.

Chris

[Lanny]

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment!
All the best,
Lanny