A House?

What is a house?

A house . . .

A box of things?

A house . . .

A giant crate love-filled?

A house . . .

A tensioned kit of opposites?

A house . . .

A structured enigma of mysterious riddles populated with conflict?

A house . . .

A construct refuge as haven?

A house . . .

A building decision the architect occupant wills.

Lanny

Author's Note

Experimental poetry

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and he or she can make that house be whatever he or she decide...it is how we treat the others in the house, how we treat ourselves, and how well we keep that house up---

excellent metaphor worked perfectly in this piece that proves "less is more"

you don't waste words!

j.

[Lanny]

Yes, the architect occupant is the key. Thanks for taking the time to leave such specific feedback, much appreciated.

All the best,

Lanny

[Richard M]

I love this write, Lanny. Such an easy topic, that we so often take for granted, so simple, yet so profound in its explanation! Well done!

[Lanny]

Thanks for leaving your kind feedback, much appreciated. All the best,

Lanny

[pam love]

YES....REAlly good.
pam

[Lanny]

Pam,

Many thanks,

Lanny

[Chris Shaw]

A house is a shelter to me. A place of sanctuary however grand or humble it may be. It's good to experiment.

Chris

[Lanny]

Chris,
Thanks for the reflections about the poem, and I agree with your assessment. Moreover, I agree that without experimenting with various forms or with various healthy risks, where would we be?

All the best,

Lanny

[Cherrie]

This is where construction finds purpose and heart.

[Lanny]

Thanks for your perceptive reply, most appreciated.

[Onlyme]

Now i loved this conception and a well crafted stylish poem about the fundamentals of a house. Eloquently expressed and nicely done too.

[Lanny]

Many thanks for dropping by and thanks for leaving your kind comments as well.

All the best,

Lanny

[Onlyme]

my pleasure.