the reason i dont sleep

Nightmares grip my lonely heart

darkness seeps into all thats pure

terror pains and evil start

all the sudden i feel so unsure

of myself and who i am

but those thoughts fade

and i awake with a clean soul

im just unrested and assulted

by the darkness that resides

deep in my mind

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

sowwy bou the first reviewan to b such a critique fo so young
but first lines u rhymed than stopped an moved on! whats that bout message me p i do it to i kniw but me is hypocrite

this mirrors my own self, actually.

night tremors, I've always had them. I've got the sort of problem where I go to sleep, wake up after a couple of hours, sleep again, wake up, sleep, etc, etc. you get the point, I suppose.

I like how you didn't try to make it rhyme.