Snow

As I look to the sky white snow flake's fall gently on my skin.
Cold, it's cold, and as pure white as cloud's in the lovely blue sky that's above my head,
I can hear kid's playing, and laughing with there friend's,
But not me, I stand still admireing the white wonderland that covers the ground from head to toe.

Author's Note

I hope I did ok! Tell me what you think ^^

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Love it. Great description and portrayal of snow. I like how all the other people are playing and I can just imagine a unique person standing staring as the flakes fall. Awesome.

[Kena]

This could use a bit more detail, but I do happen to like it a lot. :)

[Dark Angel]

More detail on the snow. Explain the white wonderland, make us feel the snow, see it's sparkling wonder. Most people don't like snow because it's cold. Make us love it even though it's cold. And also, if it's snowing, the sky is not blue.

[Cherry Blossom]

I used to just stand out side and look at the wonderfland sill do. You did a wondeful job on this poem

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Nice short poem :)
I also love to admire the white wonderland of snow ^_^
:D

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wasting time and seeing others happy but not you??
Why don't stare at the nature and gain calmness right?? Nature loves you too!! lol...
nice write...

[loowzerX]

:)

[FireFly15]

This was very interesting to read, keep up the good work!

100/100

[David W Moore III]

Well, since I just finished writing my winter poem, it's great to see another appreciating the simple beauty of winter. And I stare in wonder at the fluffiest carpet imaginable wondering if I could eat it and be covered head to toe. I love winter. I hate hot and muggy.