Pulled away

maybe a little short

I was pulled away from all that i loved,
clinging to the floor while trying not to be draged away.
i cried an endless river of tears,
knowing i'll never see or hold them agian.

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Cherryblossom]

almost made me cry sis but it was good

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short but sad and holds a lot of emotion.

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Nice :D :)

[Marie Harrison]

Yep that's what it's like parting with the one's we love. Fabulous job.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

The pain of lost would never be the same as other kind of pain...
It was the most painful thing you could ever felt..

[dovetailer]

There are things in life that separate us from the things we want...the things we crave...
Unrequited love is one thing...but to taste once and be separated but someoneor something. is kinda like being blind...seeing all the beauty or a moment ; then becoming blind again... agonizing...
Good insight...

[Caitlynxoxo]

i loved this, though i wish you would have made it longer!! I I do agree with fall, though: it does make a statement, a strong one at that. Fantastic job!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great start, just a suggestion maybe you should add more unless thats how you want it to end. what I get from it is a love you don't want to let go but you have too and thats what hurts, remember poetry is aways open to interpretation.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

Thanks Fall/chan!!!!

[nono]

everyone feels like this sometime or another this is short but it makes a statement nice job!