Pulled away

maybe a little short

I was pulled away from all that i loved,
clinging to the floor while trying not to be draged away.
i cried an endless river of tears,
knowing i'll never see or hold them agian.

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

very short..but i liked it..
i enjoyed reading it:)

[Sweets]

Nicely done :D

[Cassiopia Summers]

"draged" should actually be dragged

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. could be expanded, maybe.

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[KaySea]

nice pic.
i liked it alot

[TTBoy28]

Short and sweet!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. No wasted words. To be separated from friend can make us want to cling to things that will be missed. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Cherry Blossom]

this is short but so beautiful love it

[KatiePie]

I like "endless river of tears" The metaphor is beautiful.