Gray Eyes~

Its bout a Boy its not really spose to ryme

Your Rare smile makes my day light up,

i find myself traped in your arms,

warm, light falls on your face,

i know ive found my place.

and its with you~

 

 

 

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a jewel~ a beautiful poetic jewel~

[Cherry Blossom]

so sweet I love it

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

A beautiful little piece. Great job!!!

Heather

[Cherryblossom]

sis it was good

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Aww so sweeet, and romantic :D :)

[Marie Harrison]

Romantic poem. I love the color gray. It's sexy.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Hurm...kinda attack my work title "Blue eyes" lol...
still, good write...
Kinda short though...Could add up more sentences to further the depth..but no biggy...

[dovetailer]

hmmm
been there...done that...
no feeling like that one...

[Dark Angel]

"its" is also supposed to be "it's." I like the feeling of being complete from the one simple stanza. Most of the time I like long poems to express emotions but you were able to do it in a minimum of words.

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grammar aside..short but very sweet :)