Gray Eyes~

Its bout a Boy its not really spose to ryme

Your Rare smile makes my day light up,

i find myself traped in your arms,

warm, light falls on your face,

i know ive found my place.

and its with you~

 

 

 

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

sweet write..
it is to the point..
nice job done:)

[Sweets]

Very touching and sweet (:

[SimplyDisastrous]

This is so sweet. It's short but so touching. The ring is a very nice touch. Good job. (:

[Senseless whatever]

Beautiful write. Good poems don't have to rhyme. This piece has a calm and even flow to it that just melts the reader.

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[loowzerX]

love it

[KaySea]

very nice. i loved it

[Lovely Lady]

LOve it!

[J. R.]

Short, simple and to the point. Good work

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is short. Sweet and to the point. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote