Skater girl

Skater girl

A Story by LR

1. A female looking teen skates down a hill with an extreme look on her face, she flips in the air and jump kicks a wall. The girl lands and pops a sucker in her mouth. The girl narrates as two friends cheer her on. [ Yeah I looked awesome didn't I? I know I know, way past awesome...] 

2. The other girls run up to her screaming in fits of joy. [ Though today freaking sucks, these aren't even my real friends. ] Girl 1. " That was pretty awesome, But you might want to not try to out do everything. There's a group of guys who do nothing BUT skate. And they challenge anyone who appears decent." The second girl jumps in the chat abit more worried. " You might end up like everyone's favorite video game nerd. Jones." 

3. The skater girl glares and goes to walk off. Skater " I'm not scared of some skater punks." She turns around and smiles " And what of this Jones? I'm pretty sure he didn't get caught up in some losers turf war." The other girls give off odd looks and both scream. " BUT WHERE IS HE THEN? " Skater " How the hell should I know? I just got here.. remember? " The Skater rolls off into the distance leaving behind the clueless girls.

4. Two guys are sitting on the school's steps, one's a slightly larger guy with a pikachu shirt and grey jeans. The other guy is a slimmer looking guy, braids, sun glasses and a cool demeaner about him. Guy one. " Did Jones ever call you back man? Last I heard he was on that IMVU chat thing." Mark pulls out a PSP and smirks, Mark " IMVU? I'm starting to wonder about him Carl." Carl lowers his sunglasses and glares. " That coming from a pokemon nerd. Oh yeah.. BOTH of you guys need to get laid."

5. A shadow stands over Mark and Carl as they look up slightly confused. Skater " What of IMVU? You got a problem with it? I should punch both of you in the FACE." The Skater girl is finally seen in full, wearing baggy jean, a tank top like white shirt, long red brown hair, black and red gloves, and white gym shoes. Carl " 'Cuse me? Who're YOU? " Mark " She's my new girlfriend." 

6. The girl does a twisted face and glares. " I'm not anyone's GIRL friend dude. " She sighs and lowers her head. " Bros, it's me... Jones." Carl and Mark stare and both laugh. Mark " Yeah .. right. And I'm the star of the football team." Carl continues to glare and speaks " Wait... Mark. Your new girlfriend thinks she's our bro." Carl grabs the girl's shirt in a threatening matter. " Jones was a little odd, but don't be joking about our bro! Or that pretty face won't be so pretty anymore." 

7. The boys walk off into the school as the Skater stares in shock. " How am I 'posed to explain this to them. " [ 12 hours ago ... ] Jones, shirtless, in grey jeans is lying on the sofa bored. " The rents are finally gone for the month on vacation. And I can't get a single person over to start it off." Jones goes on his laptop and smirks. " I'll just perfect my program then, loser nerd today, super rich nerd tomorrow. " 

8. Jones moves some papers off his desk; Jone's phone rings and makes him jump a little. Jones " you've reached the loser hotline, how did you get this number?" Jones's face turns near white as the voice speaks. " Hey, this Rebecca. You was suppose to be here an hour ago. Everyone's going to think you chickened out. I don't want to date JAKE!" Jones does a face of extreme grief. " Look Becca, NO ONE told you to accept that bet. I'm not getting into a one vs 6 fight!" 

9. Rebecca smirks as a shadow stands behind her. Rebecca " Well that's okay. The guys are coming over there. " Jones " WHAT!!!" The phone hangs up as Jones glares at his table. " You got to be kidding me... I thought we were friends." Jones's front door crashes open, two large guys stand there where the door should be. Guy one " Punk lives HERE? Not a bad place." Guy 2 pulls out a bat " Heh, too bad we're gonna trash this place." 

10. Jones runs to the stairs as the guys stop and glare; Jones freezes in fear as the two guys run up towards him. [ 10 hours ... ] Jones is beaten and out cold on the floor as a larger shadow stands over his motionless body. " Here you go kiddo, today you was a lump of coal. Now you'll be a gem tomorrow. " The shadow throws a stone on Jones's chest, Jones barely opens his eyes as the shadow figure walks off. Jones " wai.... " Jones passes out again. 

11. [ 2 hours before the opening ... ] Jones walks into his bathroom, he turns the shower on, steps in the shower. Jones  rubs his eyes and jumps in slight pain. " ARGH. I hate those guys...." Jones looks down and stares in complete disbelief. A pan out view of his house is shown as a large scream is heard. [ Now... ] Skater " Ugh... Yeah. There's NO WAY  I can explain any of this without sounding like a complete TOOL. " 

© 2012 LR


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I like it
It does read a bit like a screen play awesome job

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Added on September 22, 2012
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