Esselya: The Eighth Star
A Book by Beth Elaina
 An invasion of the beloved city of learning and healing leaves only a small band of survivors. They have a long way to travel and many terrors to face, but first they must face the terrors that lie within themselves.  © 2008 Beth Elaina
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Please comment on characterization, first impressions, etc. I'd like to know if the characters are coming across as I intend. I know I need more description, so if you see a place that you feel needs more description, please be specific.
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Added on February 12, 2008
Last Updated on August 25, 2008
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Beth ElainaPortland, OR
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I've been writing for as long as I have been able hold a pencil and formulate words. But it was only recently that I decided that I really wanted some other people to read my work, because, as flawed.. more..
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