Destruction

YOU FIGURE IT OUT YOUR SELF!!!

The last thing I remember is all the shades of red from that dark night. Crystals covering the trees and blanketing the ground.

And the life pouring out of my family and friends.

It flowed around my feet as I wade towards the opposite side of the dripping river.

And as I stand on the stained banks of hell, I stare down to all those that I killed.

I stare and cry for all that I did.

Weeping at the chaos my life has brought from my choices.

And I know that this image will always be here when I close my eyes.

And that I can never undo the destruction I have caused.

Author's Note

I finaly got around to editin this thing...So tellme what do you think?

Reviews

[Michael X]

the meaning reminds me of such a touchy sbject, perhaps abortion, or the like, in which i have no way to answer that, but i will say, this is a powerful poem
and the wording stands out in conviction, excellent job.

[chaffy]

opposite on the 4th line.. this seems like a good start for a story.. sad, but quite a pretty image.