Unrequited Pt. 2

Unrequited Pt. 2

A Poem by Lissy
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The second part of my poem 'Unrequited'. This was when I had a huge crush on my friend, who was also a girl and with someone else. Unrequited love sucks, eh? Oh well. I'm happy she didn't like me back, otherwise I wouldn't have fallen for the boy who has

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Unrequited Pt. 2

 

I often question

How I feel

The emotions inside

Seem too real

 

Every time you're near

My heart goes crazy

I breathe in your scent

And you leave me hazy

 

Why do  I feel

Like this for you

When I know you'll never

Feel for me, too?

 

I can't help it, though

You're always on my mind

And I can't stop feeling

Like you should be mine

 

A perfect match

That's what we'd be

I compliment you

And you compliment me

 

Meant to be together

Like two parts of a whole

But we won't be

So we'll never know

 

We'll never be

Because you're with him

And us together

People consider a sin

 

But they don't know you

And they don't know me

With that said

They should leave us be

 

It doesn't matter, though

Because we're not together

I have no chance

Not now, not ever

 

As long as you're happy

With a heart of steel

I'll fake a smile

And ignore what I feel

© 2009 Lissy


Author's Note

Lissy
So, let me know what you think. I think anybody can relate to this poem. ^_^

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Do you really think that you have no chance or is it just a character you created? Either way, I do love this poem, but I was just curious.
This reminds me so much of my friend right now. She is having the exact same problem with a guy that she likes and it just eats at her that he doesn't feel the same way. (But the rest of us (her friends) totally think he does dig her aha)

Anywho, great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Do you really think that you have no chance or is it just a character you created? Either way, I do love this poem, but I was just curious.
This reminds me so much of my friend right now. She is having the exact same problem with a guy that she likes and it just eats at her that he doesn't feel the same way. (But the rest of us (her friends) totally think he does dig her aha)

Anywho, great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 14, 2009

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Lissy
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Lenexa, KS



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