Aching

Aching

 

Heart felt moments, wander by

drifting slowly, ever more

Grasping thoughts of days long past

a keeper at each door

 

Each door unlock a vision

of broken unkempt ways

Together in a memory

vivid thoughts they stayed

 

Leering though each open door

truth a vibrant sight

My love for you waned softly

full of dread and fright

 

Never was the pain so clear

each single aching limb

Torn apart and ravaged

death came from the sin

 

In innocence distress was caused

destroying each and every plan

Each door forever open

for the beauty ,that is damned

Reviews

[Haunzwürthe]

I agree, speechless is an understatement. The feeling you portray is as close to one seeing inside another as it can possibly be. Adding to my library...

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

I felt this one deep into the marrow of my bones. I do not know what ese to say.