As She Passes By

Angels play the music that make her dance so free...a sweet melody

As She Passes By

                                          

 

 

She danced in time to music only she could hear
Her body swayed to the beat as she skipped across the air, 
in fact the truth be told, she was a delight to see
Though no one could catch a glimpse...no one except me

As she frolicked so free to the rhythm of Heaven
a giggle would escape her as a sweet melody
She moved and glided as if she didn't have a care,
she sang her songs of praise as she hovered in the air

I catch a peek now and then of her presence near
As she passes by I know it is her, that is clear
Though she does not stir the air and not a ripple she makes
I can see her beauty clearly by the pictures she paints

I only have to look above to know she is close to me,
Angels play the music that makes her dance so free

I sway to the beat of her silent laughter
singing in perfect rhythm to my heart
I feel her gentle breath and I can hear her whisper...

Someday Mommy, we will never be apart!

 

Author's Note

For my little girl.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A poetically compassionate flow of heartfelt emotions. Delicate stanza wordplay and respectful metaphoric format, has produced a wonderful composition! Though a sad subject to reflect upon - you have given the reader an interesting perspective to ponder on - bless you! :-)

[Effie]

Thank you for reading this and your kind comments are very much appreciated. Blessings!

[Rye]

Aw this is so heart warming and wonderful

[Effie]

Thank you again for another very kind comment. I appreciate you taking time to read my words.

[Rye]

not a problem

[Onlyme]

Effie, this is without a doubt spectacularly beautiful and so heartfelt as so moving. Made me feel so many emotions, from happy to sad and wanting to cry. Oh what a glorious happy angel she is dancing away. So sorry Effie, for your loss of your little girl. As you said always with you close inside and out.💕

[Effie]

Thank you so much for reading and your kind words. I miss her terribly! Yet she is always here with me in my heart of love. Thank you again. It is always a blessing to hear from you.

[Onlyme]

She is and always will be Effie. And lovely to hear from you lovely Effie with a pure heart, like your daughter two angels one above, one on earth.

[Effie]

Thank you my friend!

[Onlyme]

Your more than very welcome, because it is so true.😊

[Sami Khalil]

Very lovely and endearing. I can't express the beauty portrayed here. It is valuable. It is immesurable.

[Effie]

Thank you Sami. I read this when missing her threatens to over take me. The color of her life continues and I feel her breath on my face.

[Sami Khalil]

So true. You are welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poem. She will never be that far away.

Chris

[Effie]

Thank you for reading and your words of encouragement. This writing lifts my heart because at times I do feel her close.

[Abraham Kureshi]

Well expressed with good usage of words. Well done!

[Effie]

Thank you again for reading and your kind review.

[Haley]

This is a genuinely beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it.

[Effie]

I appreciate you reading and your kind comment. Thank you

[Oldsoul.J]

this is a beautiful poem, made me a bit sad but yes, she is right; someday, you'll be together again. have faith. Love this.

[Effie]

I believe we will. Thank you so much for your review and kind words.

[Laurierose]

This was very beautiful. You've captured the rawness of feelings and hanressed them into something amazing. Great read.

[Effie]

Even after all this time the feelings can still be very raw. Thank you so much for your kind review.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

This was so beautiful and unique! Thank you for sharing this excellent poetry! It reminded me about Sara and how she is there looking out for me!
I loved the imagery!
Keep up the incredible work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Effie]

I believe she is as close to you are your own heart. Thank you for the kind review my friend C.Lee

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you once again! And you are very welcome my friend!