Creation

 

 

 

CREATION

 

Paint me red
Paint me gold
Smash me up
And make me old

Give me flesh
Give me bone
Give me blood to make me whole

Paint my hair
Paint my eyes
Paint my lips
Make it a surprise

Give me a soul
And a mind to think
Give me some words
So I can speak

Paint me a picture
To show I am real
Give me some love
So I may have time to feel

Paint me red
Paint me gold
Give me flesh
And a life to behold.

 

 

Author's Note

Something Unfolding, a creation

Reviews

[The Outlaws' Song]

Wonderful.It sounds like a spell.it made me imagine you in front of a pot making a magic potion and surrounded by small colored bottles of secret ingredients.it's the effect of the colors you chose for each stanza.
great flow.It reads very well.

wonderful creation.Absolutely lovely.

Keep it coming

[Fran Marie]

A very nice flowing rhyme to this piece ~ with cadence spot on~Well DonE!!~Fran Marie

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

Honey, this is excellant!
The flow, the pace...the wording, stupendous!
A brilliant write, by and excellant artist of language.
Bravo Baby!

'D'

[Enigma]

I agree!! Sounds like a spell, a chant of some kind.It's awesome, I tell you!! I like the way you've framed each line.Really impressive!!
Keep such writing coming up.This one great creation!!
AWESOME!!