Lost Fairy Princesses Poem 1

Lost Fairys finding there way

3 fairies tread thee path 

daughters lost will once again find their path

back to the king

with their loved ones

by their sides

honest hand and

true love given 

Author's Note

Please read and review. The reason it says thee instead of the is because I wanted to have a little old English so I wrote thee witch means the. Just wanted to let anyone who was woundering about this. Also I fix treed to tread.

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love it, try finding another word for path for the second line, maybe a synonym, but I love it either way.

[Green]

Where you wrote treed I believe you mean tread
Also there's one to many e's in the but that was probably an accident
That is all, good job

[Bright Fairy]

Oh yeah tis is poem 1