SurpriseA Chapter by Closet WriterChapter7Seems like hours have passed but it had only been minutes. I
keep replaying what he said, “Babe, you can have my kisses as much and as often
as you want, just say the word.” How, he is leaving, he is going away and I won’t
be able to see or touch him at all! For a moment I feel as though I may cry but
fight back tears. Looking at the clock once more I settle in for the night. Next morning I meet mom as she is leaving for work with a
kiss and swift hug she is out the door. I have noticed she worked late the last
few nights, and I have not told her about anything. I get to school and Emily
is standing with a few girls, I have not been talking to her lately and she
looks mad. As I walk toward the school she stops me and snarls, “Some
friend Val! I called you like all weekend and most of last week. You are never
home anymore. Boys are a terrible excuse to completely ignore me, your supposed
best friend!” She quickly walks off not giving me any time to explain, and
personally, I do not feel like talking to anyone right now. I am still hanging
onto the words Derek said! I also know Emily well enough to say she can be a
bit self-involved. I just need to know what he meant by as much as you want. I
sigh. My birthday is in a few days I sure hope she gets over being mad at me
before then. Final bell rings for the day and I go to my locker. Emily is
standing there and she hugs me, it was like a hundred and eight swap from her
mood this morning. “OH Val! I am so sorry! I just missed you is all!” Emily
says before she hugs me. I smile at her and tell her, “It’s nothing to worry
about and hug her, she says, “be ready for your birthday only four days left! Then
you are legal! I cannot wait to cut the cake!” We both laugh, and walk home. On the way home I have spilled
the details with Derek, and she is in shock, when she speaks she says, “Valery,
you love him. It’s in your entire body that you are drawn to him. Go for it
honey!” I smile and she walks inside.
More to think about, great! I make it to my drive way and seen my gorgeous man
standing there. He hands me a piece of paper, and smiles with a soft kiss he
walks away not saying a single word. I walk inside, and place all my things by the door, walking
to my room I take out this piece of paper, with my name written on it, and
start to read. Dear
Valery, We
have known each other for the last two weeks, and I know I have fallen for you.
I know I want nothing more than to spend an entire life time with you. I know
your birthday is coming, and I found out I leave the day before. So I want to
ask that you meet me where we first had our date and I would like to give you a
birthday gift before I leave. I am totally crazy about you Valery. Nothing makes me happier
than you. I Love You! I gasp! How, what? I know I care for him in a way I cannot
explain. Perhaps I do love him, and I must get ready. I have to meet him.
Thankfully I have no homework this evening and I can work on getting ready. I
put on my favorite jeans, and find a dark purple top, putting it on I find my
boots and work on my hair, I curl it and pin it up neatly. Looking at the clock
it is six and I head out the door. I get to the pier, and it’s lit with beautiful candles, and
in the middle is a tall man, dark headed, with beautiful blazing green eyes,
and standing with a rose in his hand. As I approach he kneels on one knee and
pulls a small black box from his pocket. I say nothing I freeze in shock and I …
He speaks, Valery, I know this is sudden, but
I love you, I love you so much! Valery Gail, I want to spend my life coming
home to you, loving you, and I want to know you are always safe, and I never
want anything more in my life than you. Marry me? I can’t speak, but I am freaking out, and I without thinking
really I blurt, “YES!” Oh my god, Valery what have you just done, my conscious screams
at me and I happily ignore her. I notice tears falling and I can’t help but embrace him, he
then speaks, “Valery, you have just made me the happiest, most lucky man
in all the world!” I say, “Derek I am so happy, I love you.” I said it and it
was not strange but so fulfilling. I am in love with a man, who knew I could
love and be in love so quickly, it’s like I crossed over from child to an adult
and I notice he is putting something on my finger, a beautiful white gold ring
with a small but appropriate diamond in the center, and I love it. It is me on
so many levels. He looks down and kisses me, and I kiss him back. His kisses
are always warm, and soft, and full of heat and passion, I truly am very lucky!
I found it, this complete feeling I have been looking for I found it. I step back and I know time is standing still he caresses my
cheek and kisses my forehead, and softy says, “now Valery, do you have a date
in mind,” and I know he is hoping before he leaves. You leave before my birthday
and right now I do not know. He is smiling at me and I just hug him once more. © 2015 Closet Writer |
StatsAuthorCloset WriterLompoc, CAAboutI am Victoria! I am 22 years young! I have been writing since I could remember! I am married with one son! My other babies consist of two rather rambunctious dogs! I am a college student, and my .. more..Writing
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