Moondance

A night for a moondance

The night is still young
When you bring me home
The joy you have brought me
Keeps me thankful I wasn’t alone

You smile, only the way you can
And I return the favor
Why does this night have to end?
It is one I will forever savor

My hand, now in yours
as we watch the stars shine bright
I want to live this forever,
replay this one night

You close in on me
Your lips, only inches from mine
But in the end, I give in,
Because your love is so divine

Your lips, so soft, so sweet
Touching mine is my ideal world
Now I know I’m in love,
And I’m happy that I’m your girl

By your side is where I want to be
For the rest of my life
I know that someday soon,
I will be your wife

The moon shines brightly
But I’m too deep in a trance
You whisper in my ear,
‘It’s a marvelous night for a moon dance’

 

Author's Note

Please review...yes this poem was on another profile but I forgot my password and I cannot seem to get it sent to my e-mail.....so....yeah.....

Reviews

[D.H.Simmons]

I think this is pretty good but predictable hope your relationships works out

[Ben]

This is very good. I like it. I don't see any spelling mistakes. Good work!