Capsized

You drowned me in promises

     of tomorrow, in the

          weight of the 

               future,

but left me with no life jacket

or bouy. Didn't even toss out a bit

of driftwood to keep me afloat

as you left me behind,

     promises breaking like

          waves against your hull. 

Reviews

[emme33]

Love this! Beautiful writing :)

[Karel]

i like the image of the capsized boat you use here to convey the message