One of the lost ones

i found this story on the corners of my PC yesterday... was written by me almost 3 years ago.. i was almost 15 xD

Shh don’t cry

I don’t worth the tears

I love you too much to let you follow me.

I’m not worthy of your love,

I despite your sorrow

Believe me this way

You will forget me by tomorrow

 

Oblivion be my goal to end my grieve

My lack of faith drives me slowly to insanity

I must do something to stop this, stop it on my way!

But first I must shun you, my friend, my strength

 

My bizarre tormentor who looks only for my fall

His eyes always with me, his voice never leave me

Made me fool, made me weak

closed my eyes for not to see whne you were near me.

 

And I felt he would help me

I believed what he claimed

“Pretty little one, you must die to end your pain”

he repeated every night and day

 

I know he lies, I know he is evil

But he is the only, the one and only

Who never left me on my own,

he said you will

And you did

 

My only companion my eternal course

Always speaking, always sinking me deeper into darkness

 

I can see your light no more, you left

Now, I surrender

 

Insanity be his allied to achieve his goal

Please be strong my sweet little demon

As one we shall enter the gates of home

 

Author's Note

is not a masterpiece... and my knowledge of grammar was in it's worse stages. I hope i will be able to show improovement in my, yet to come , future works

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