Please

It's not right
It's not real
It's just the way I feel
So please
Hold my hand
Even if you don't understand
I know it's rough
You've had enough
But please don't leave when times get tough

Reviews

[R E Tree]

Wow... I think we both have a very similar writing style. I almost felt like I was reading my own poem. I think we are alike in some ways. Or maybe shared the same experiences. This is a powerful read. I find it short and sweet.

[Free Thinker]

Thx love 🖤🖤🖤

[Chris]

You bring memories...

"Pleas..."

I was three
Daddy Jack left
me
standing at the closed gate
watching the world
...my world...
end...
as it always has -
again
and again
and again.

Chris

[Free Thinker]

Love love love it 🖤🖤🖤

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This was a very moving piece of poetry. A yearning for friendship, companionship, and love. It really speaks to the heart. As all good art should. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

[Free Thinker]

Again I am blown away that something I wrote something that came from my head has the power to speak to someone's heart