Her Storm

Tears run down her face falling to the ground
From the sky lightening flashes with every piece of her that dies
The deafening crash of thunder covers the sounds of her cries

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very strong use of words. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote.

[Free Thinker]

Wow thx so much 🖤🖤🖤

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Free Thinker.

[Chris Shaw]

Inner turmoil here. Not a good place to be. An intense piece of brevity. Thanks for sharing.

Chris

[Free Thinker]

Thx Chris 🖤🖤🖤

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[light and ashes]

beautiful, short, and somewhat intense.
I could really feel the emotion you conveyed in the breaking of this woman.

[Free Thinker]

Thx 🖤🖤🖤

[light and ashes]

Welcome 🖤

[John the Baptist]

This storm sounds like an inner one. They can be the worst.

[Free Thinker]

Thx for reading my work