Park Love

The sun's at my back the moon's at my feet
All the space in between is incomplete
The stars are in my eyes
The clouds in my head
Hearing what was said
The wind in my hair
Grass on my knees
Still waiting for me

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Ever since a lad I'd been,

I've enjoyed laying in the grass gazing at the stars and moon, and how wonderfully you've laid it all out in this brilliant Free Style. I'm amazed, too, at the uniquely creative imagery in your expression of a day, "The sun's at my back the moon's at my feet," and you've said so much in one line, "All the space in between is incomplete."

You've said it all, and the way you put it, who could help but love it in the park at night … or, waiting for a lover.
Beautiful, Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Free Thinker]

Wow Wow Wow thx no one has ever said such things about anything I've ever written

[Richard🖌]

Then, Dear Poetess,
They either were just shy, failed to perceive what I have, or simply lacked insight … perhaps, too envious to openly admire your eloquence.
Could be that we both happen to be Texans. ; )

Actually, it's astonishing I'm the one and only to review this sweet little piece. 😏

[Free Thinker]

No one has ever said anything about it here or on any other site lol it must be because you speak texan lol 😆

[Richard🖌]

Hm?
Seems I need to read and review more of your poems for you … you're just not getting enough good ol' Texas brags … LOL!